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You told me to look after your heart
so I did and I never let you fall apart
Could you give me some warmth?

This chilling in me
follows me till I drop,
so please,
could you finally hear me out?

I know the way you go
because I've been the same for too long:
my choices are just as wrong.

So when I'm crying alone
will you be gone?

This is such a late goodbye.

For you, my love.
This poem is inspired by various Poets of The Fall songs: Change, Dying to Live, Roses, Late Goodbye and probably more. I just let the emotion follow, nothing more to say. I imagined the pain that comes from carrying other people's problems. Or maybe I didn't need to imagine.
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Tacticalcraft Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
oooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!        Perfect! 
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Hineko12 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^
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Shakshun Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful as always. 
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Hineko12 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awws, thanks luv <4
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Shakshun Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem darling <3
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